Issue 03 - Revision history

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	The team phone Cal for a lift home, and Jen gets ready to explain the events of the evening.		The team phone Cal for a lift home, and Jen gets ready to explain the events of the evening.
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 [[Flare]] (in disguise) and [[Goliath]] gather themselves and charge into Farlander, Jen trips him and allows Goliath to send him reeling, and Flare gathers his tracking device, weathering his blows without harm.  Flare destroys the tracking device.
-Claymore collapses the back of the house on top of Huntress which gives the group enough time to flee.  Riptide encourages Jen to run, and they help the last few stragglers leave the garden over the fence, along with Phillipa, who Jen returns the damaged hockey stick to with thanks. By the time they look back the alien ship is gone, Riptide informs the team that he called in the event, so hopefully someone from AEGIS or the Exemplars will make sure the ship is properly gone. As Flare tries to figure out if anyone was filming the attack she fails to notice [[Shade]] observing from the shadows of a tree.
+The Huntress grabs Kara and is ready to take her up into the ship, but Claymore collapses the back of the house on top of the gigantic alien which gives the group enough time to flee.  Riptide encourages Jen to run, and they help the last few stragglers leave the garden over the fence, along with Phillipa, who Jen returns the damaged hockey stick to with thanks. By the time they look back the alien ship is gone, Riptide informs the team that he called in the event, so hopefully someone from AEGIS or the Exemplars will make sure the ship is properly gone. As Flare tries to figure out if anyone was filming the attack she fails to notice [[Shade]] observing from the shadows of a tree.
 The team and their new friends regroup in the woods, Rayne and Kara make amends after the events of the evening.  The Exemplars compliment the team on how they handled it, and Riptide recognises Claymore from the [[The Troll|Troll]] Takedown in [[Issue 02]].  [[Nihil]] reveals to them that it was her they were after in a brief display of power.  Riptide gives them an Young Exemplars business card, and tells them to pop round anytime.
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 [[Cal Jericho]] picks up the girls from the HAUS in his black sedan, and gives Jen a lecture on good behaviour and responsibility, and is obviously a huge fan of Jennifer having friends and getting socialised.  Rayne does Jen's hair and makeup as they drive, much to her confusion.
-The group arrives at the already jumping party and drop off their coats.  Everyone gets a red solo cup of Sprite from Peter and he takes them into the party proper.  Kara is eager to get to James, but Rayne tells her to keep it cool.  They play some <del>beer</del>Sprite pong against James.
+The group arrives at the already jumping party and drop off their coats.  Everyone gets a red solo cup of Sprite from Peter and he takes them into the party proper.  Kara is eager to get to James, but Rayne tells her to keep it cool.  They play some <del>beer</del>Sprite pong against James and a friend.
 Meanwhile Danny bumps into/eavesdrops on a pair of Young Exemplars at the party.  Ken, a nervous giant monster known as [[Goliath]], and Xevv, the incoginto underwater royalty [[Riptide]].  Ken is nervous about being stared at, but with Xevv and Danny's help he's encourage to return to party.
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 As Peter splashes into the pool a massive spotlight illuminates him from above.  The crowd is surprised that it's an alien ship.  A very alien figure quickly descends from the ship wielding a scanning device.  He is the Alien tracker [[Farlander]].  Following him is a massive humanoid figure known as The [[Huntress]].  She exclaims "You promised you would get me an instrument!" [[File:Ship.PNG|thumb|right]].  He scurries into the crowd of screaming party attendees and emerges holding Rayne in 2 of his arms.  He explains that there are residual readings coming from her, and that this is definitely the place.
-Huntress demands that
+Huntress demands that the bearer of great power surrender, or she will destroy everyone here.  In confusion Goliath puts himself forward, but is blasted through a patio door by an energy blast.  Danny goes to check on him.  Kara tries to gather her power, but the combination of alcohol and mental anguish of the evening leaves her reeling, Jen squeezes her arm to keep her standing.  James charges at Farlander with a pool rake to try and rescue Rayne, but Claymore grab a hockey stick and leaps into action to protect both from harm, suffering an energy blast from the alien in the attempt.  Claymore berates her as Kara jumps into save the dropped Rayne and tells them to run.  Claymore has realised the aliens are here for [[Nihil]].
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 As Peter splashes into the pool a massive spotlight illuminates him from above.  The crowd is surprised that it's an alien ship.  A very alien figure quickly descends from the ship wielding a scanning device.  He is the Alien tracker [[Farlander]].  Following him is a massive humanoid figure known as The [[Huntress]].  She exclaims "You promised you would get me an instrument!" [[File:Ship.PNG|thumb|right]].  He scurries into the crowd of screaming party attendees and emerges holding Rayne in 2 of his arms.  He explains that there are residual readings coming from her, and that this is definitely the place.
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	At the locked bathroom Jen and Kara hear Rayne sneak out the window, and Jen busts open the door to follow, chasing Rayne round to the back of the house where the pool is. Meanwhile Danny, Ken and Xevv along with the rest of the party guest are summoned to the back where Peter is apparently about to jump into the pool from the roof.		At the locked bathroom Jen and Kara hear Rayne sneak out the window, and Jen busts open the door to follow, chasing Rayne round to the back of the house where the pool is. Meanwhile Danny, Ken and Xevv along with the rest of the party guest are summoned to the back where Peter is apparently about to jump into the pool from the roof.

−	As Peter splashes into the pool a massive spotlight illuminates him from above. The crowd is surprised that it's an alien ship. An alien figure ~~lowers~~ from the ship wielding [[File:Ship.PNG\|thumb\|right]]	+	As Peter splashes into the pool a massive spotlight illuminates him from above. The crowd is surprised that it's an alien ship. A very alien figure quickly descends from the ship wielding a scanning device. He is the Alien tracker [[Farlander]]. Following him is a massive humanoid figure known as The [[Huntress]]. She exclaims "You promised you would get me an instrument!" [[File:Ship.PNG\|thumb\|right]]. He scurries into the crowd of screaming party attendees and emerges holding Rayne in 2 of his arms. He explains that there are residual readings coming from her, and that this is definitely the place.

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	At the locked bathroom Jen and Kara hear Rayne sneak out the window, and Jen busts open the door to follow, chasing Rayne round to the back of the house where the pool is. Meanwhile Danny, Ken and Xevv along with the rest of the party guest are summoned to the back where Peter is apparently about to jump into the pool from the roof.		At the locked bathroom Jen and Kara hear Rayne sneak out the window, and Jen busts open the door to follow, chasing Rayne round to the back of the house where the pool is. Meanwhile Danny, Ken and Xevv along with the rest of the party guest are summoned to the back where Peter is apparently about to jump into the pool from the roof.

−	As Peter splashes into the pool a massive spotlight illuminates him from above. [[File:Ship.PNG\|thumb\|right]]	+	As Peter splashes into the pool a massive spotlight illuminates him from above. The crowd is surprised that it's an alien ship. An alien figure lowers from the ship wielding [[File:Ship.PNG\|thumb\|right]]
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 The group arrives at the already jumping party and drop off their coats.  Everyone gets a red solo cup of Sprite from Peter and he takes them into the party proper.  Kara is eager to get to James, but Rayne tells her to keep it cool.  They play some <del>beer</del>Sprite pong against James.
-Meanwhile Danny bumps into/eavesdrops on a pair of Young Exemplars at the party.  Ken, a nervous giant monster known as [[Goliath]], and Xevv, the incoginto underwater royalty [[Riptide]].  Ken is nervous about being stared at, but with Xevv and Danny's help he's encourage to return to party, where Danny also dispatches a mean girl with a spilled wine illusion.
+Meanwhile Danny bumps into/eavesdrops on a pair of Young Exemplars at the party.  Ken, a nervous giant monster known as [[Goliath]], and Xevv, the incoginto underwater royalty [[Riptide]].  Ken is nervous about being stared at, but with Xevv and Danny's help he's encourage to return to party.
-Back at the ping pong table Kara gets a little tipsy and while trying to wing for Rayne accidentally ends up flirting with him instead,  Rayne storms off in tears.  Jen encounters Phillipa, the captain of the Hockey team who sarcastically welcomes back 'Hurricane' Jennifer to the team.  They banter, and she mellows a little and explains that there are some important games coming up, and she hopes Jen can hep the team pull out some victories.
+Back at the ping pong table Kara gets a little tipsy and while trying to wing for Rayne accidentally ends up flirting with him instead,  Rayne storms off in tears.  Jen encounters Phillipa, the captain of the Hockey team who sarcastically welcomes back 'Hurricane' Jennifer to the team.  They banter, and she mellows a little and explains that there are some important games coming up, and she hopes Jen can hep the team pull out some victories.  Jen heads off after Rayne and Kara.

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	[[Cal Jericho]] picks up the girls from the HAUS in his black sedan, and gives Jen a lecture on good behaviour and responsibility, and is obviously a huge fan of Jennifer having friends and getting socialised. Rayne does Jen's hair and makeup as they drive, much to her confusion.		[[Cal Jericho]] picks up the girls from the HAUS in his black sedan, and gives Jen a lecture on good behaviour and responsibility, and is obviously a huge fan of Jennifer having friends and getting socialised. Rayne does Jen's hair and makeup as they drive, much to her confusion.
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		+	The group arrives at the already jumping party and drop off their coats. Everyone gets a red solo cup of Sprite from Peter and he takes them into the party proper. Kara is eager to get to James, but Rayne tells her to keep it cool. They play some <del>beer</del>Sprite pong against James.
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		+	Meanwhile Danny bumps into/eavesdrops on a pair of Young Exemplars at the party. Ken, a nervous giant monster known as [[Goliath]], and Xevv, the incoginto Underwater Royal [[Riptide]]. Ken is nervous about being stared at, but with Xevv and Danny's help he's encourage to return to party, where Danny also dispatches a mean girl with a spilled wine illusion.
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		+	Back at the ping pong table Kara gets a little tipsy and while trying to wing for Rayne accidentally ends up flirting with him instead, Rayne storms off in tears. Jen encounters Phillipa, the captain of the Hockey team who sarcastically welcomes back 'Hurricane' Jennifer to the team. They banter, and she mellows a little and explains that there are some important games coming up, and she hopes Jen can hep the team pull out some victories.

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	Jen goes for sensible jeans, boots and top combo.		Jen goes for sensible jeans, boots and top combo.
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		+	[[Cal Jericho]] picks up the girls from the HAUS in his black sedan, and gives Jen a lecture on good behaviour and responsibility, and is obviously a huge fan of Jennifer having friends and getting socialised. Rayne does Jen's hair and makeup as they drive, much to her confusion.