Issue 08 - Revision history

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-==Time Travel and Tribulations==
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 Among the sirens and the distraction Meltdown has escaped. Yemalla is trying to heal Mr Mercury, and Paragon and the original Pandora confront our heroes.
-Queen Regula confronts her daughter wearing her costume - "What are you supposed to be?"  they are interrupted by the arrival of a pair of AEGIS agents, including the young Agent [[Cal Jericho]], Regula's Dad and [[Agent Jefferson]].  He takes the gang back to the base.  "I'm bringing in a couple of situations."
+Queen Regula confronts her daughter wearing her costume - "What are you supposed to be?"  they are interrupted by the arrival of a pair of AEGIS agents, including the young [[Cal Jericho]], Regula's Dad.  He takes the gang back to the base.  "I'm bringing in a couple of situations."
 ===The Dam===
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 Young Queen Regula, in her civilian identity confronts our Regula.  She obviously recognises a connection between them - she clearly realises that this is one of her daughters.  She's clearly trying to get a read on her daughter's motives - telling her the costume means something and she needs to watch what she's doing swanning around in it.  The words hit her hard, and she looks sadly down into her tea as the Queen leaves.
-The gang gather and Lloyd explains his plan to use Meltdown's energy to power himself up to get them back to the future.  Kara tries to comfort Regula, but she's too distracted watching her mother bond with the Exemplars.  Meanwhile Meltdown is looming under the water at the Silvestone launch facility, as the last containers of waste are loaded.
+The gang gather and Lloyd explains his plan to use Meltdown's energy to power himself up to get them back to the future.  Kara tries to comfort Regula, while they observe the Exemplars bond over the out of costume Mr Mercury who has his leg up in a wheelchair.
 [[File:Solarmax.jpg|thumb|350px|right|SolarMax Launch]]
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 ===The Launch===
-Aboard an [[E-Jet]] orbiting the [[Silverstone Launch Facility]] the team are sitting across from Pandora I and Paragon.  As an explosive distraction draws off the 2 Exemplars, Kara senses an energy signature coming from under the rocket, and theorises that Meltdown could absorb the thrust from directly underneath.  She unlocks her belt and runs off of the opening ramp and leaps into the fray, joined by Regula.  Jefferson flies the E-Jet closer and drops Lloyd off.  Nihil
+Aboard an [[E-Jet]] orbiting the [[Silverstone Launch Facility]] on coast, the team are sitting across from Pandora I and Paragon.  As an explosive distraction draws off the 2 Exemplars, Kara senses an energy signature coming from under the rocket, and theorises that Meltdown could absorb the thrust from directly underneath.  She unlocks her belt and runs off of the opening ramp and leaps into the fray, joined by Regula.  Jefferson flies the E-Jet closer and drops Lloyd off.  Nihil charges into Meltdown and send him reeling towards The Solution.  Lloyd gets the attention of Meltdown.
 [[File:Solarmax.jpg|thumb|350px|right|SolarMax Launch]]
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−	Aboard an [[E-Jet]] orbiting the [[Silverstone Launch Facility]] the team are sitting across from Pandora I and Paragon. As an explosive distraction draws off the 2 Exemplars, Kara senses an energy signature coming from under the rocket	+	Aboard an [[E-Jet]] orbiting the [[Silverstone Launch Facility]] the team are sitting across from Pandora I and Paragon. As an explosive distraction draws off the 2 Exemplars, Kara senses an energy signature coming from under the rocket, and theorises that Meltdown could absorb the thrust from directly underneath. She unlocks her belt and runs off of the opening ramp and leaps into the fray, joined by Regula. Jefferson flies the E-Jet closer and drops Lloyd off. Nihil

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 The gang gather and Lloyd explains his plan to use Meltdown's energy to power himself up to get them back to the future.  Kara tries to comfort Regula, but she's too distracted watching her mother bond with the Exemplars.  Meanwhile Meltdown is looming under the water at the Silvestone launch facility, as the last containers of waste are loaded.
-Cal Jericho explains that he's talked to Paragon and they need the team's assistance to defeat Meltdown, and lectures Lloyd on responsibility, who starts to feel a ''little'' bit guilty.
+Cal Jericho explains that he's talked to Paragon and they need the team's assistance to defeat Meltdown, and lectures Lloyd on responsibility, who starts to feel a ''little'' bit guilty.  Regula asks Cal for some advice, and he explains that Meltdown was once Ivan Komorov, who was involved in an accident at a Soviet facility, and lost his family, and was eventually exiled from the USSR.  There's a brief moment where they share a mannerism and Cal begins to wonder about this strange connection.  Kara wanders over and asks Mr Mercury and Yemalla for a picture, and explains to them the concept of a selfie which they happily comply.  Lloyd asks if Cal can get his hands on some Return of the Jedi action figures, but Cal explains they're hard to find at the moment.
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	The gang gather and Lloyd explains his plan to use Meltdown's energy to power himself up to get them back to the future. Kara tries to comfort Regula		The gang gather and Lloyd explains his plan to use Meltdown's energy to power himself up to get them back to the future. Kara tries to comfort Regula
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		+	[[File:Solarmax.jpg\|thumb\|350px\|right\|SolarMax Launch]]

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	Young Queen Regula, in her civilian identity confronts our Regula. She obviously recognises a connection between them - she clearly realises that this is one of her daughters. She's clearly trying to get a read on her daughter's motives - telling her the costume means something and she needs to watch what she's doing swanning around in it. The words hit her hard, and she looks sadly down into her tea as the Queen leaves.		Young Queen Regula, in her civilian identity confronts our Regula. She obviously recognises a connection between them - she clearly realises that this is one of her daughters. She's clearly trying to get a read on her daughter's motives - telling her the costume means something and she needs to watch what she's doing swanning around in it. The words hit her hard, and she looks sadly down into her tea as the Queen leaves.
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		+	The gang gather and Lloyd explains his plan to use Meltdown's energy to power himself up to get them back to the future. Kara tries to comfort Regula

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 ===The Dam===
-In the secret AEGIS base in an interrogation room, Cal has questions about who the team are, and why one of these looks a lot like Regula. Paragon has also referenced a strange connection with Lloyd.  "We're from the future" Lloyd declares.  Cal explains that the waste was to be launched as part of the SolarMax mission.  As they discuss how they got there and how they'll get back Cal thinks it's cute that Lloyd thinks he invented time travel.
+In the secret AEGIS base in an interrogation room, Cal has questions about who the team are, and why one of these looks a lot like Regula. Paragon has also referenced a strange connection with Lloyd.  "We're from the future" Lloyd declares.  Cal explains that the waste was to be launched as part of the SolarMax mission, and now he's down 2 of his heaviest hitters and has Meltdown on the loose after it.  As they discuss how they got there and how they'll get back Cal thinks it's cute that Lloyd thinks he invented time travel.
 {{quote | "My name's Lloyd and I shot dinosaur crystal energy into myself to try and unlock magical powers!" Kara, sarcastically }}
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