Issue 19 - Revision history

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 ===Danny's Sanctum===
-[[File:Shade.jpg|thumb|500px]]
+[[File:Shade.jpg|thumb|500px|Shade/Gareth/Verdant]]
 Danny invites everyone to her Sanctum.  Once they make their way into the old prop room the team catchup and start to fight about Red Bastion again.  She informs them about the vision.  Starting to investigate they reach out to [[Mr Mercury]] to contact [[Phillip Sebastian]], who was until recently resident in the [[New Day New Visions Academy]].  He mentions that he never met someone with that name, but they did talk about some of the early experiments.  Gareth and Danny were all to be among the saints [[The Saints]].  Cygnus was one of the earlier ones were to be the Seraphim of the church, the Angels.  Cygnus was a warning tale for the other residents.  They escaped, and had impressive powers.  Danny promises that Philip will be the last 'batch'.

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	We see the scene from Danny's vision. Gareth reaches out to Cygnus. "I can help you, come with me." Cygnus reaches out. Danny charges her burn, and teleports in front of Gareth, interposing herself, and creates a solid brick wall moat around him. "Shut up!"		We see the scene from Danny's vision. Gareth reaches out to Cygnus. "I can help you, come with me." Cygnus reaches out. Danny charges her burn, and teleports in front of Gareth, interposing herself, and creates a solid brick wall moat around him. "Shut up!"
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		+	She turns to Cygnus - explains how Gareth corrupted her, she can't let this happen to Cygnus. Gareth makes an illusion form - he offers to help her fly free, and says that Danny doesn't have anything to offer. Danny says Gareth isn't offering real freedom - he's just going to use them. It doesn't land.
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		+	Cygnus takes Gareth's hand, something similar happens but he has more control, the darkness recedes. The brick wall drops, Gareth walks over and mergers with his duplicate. There's a breeze of fresh air as Cygnus takes a deep breath of relief. "I think I should go with him." They notice the AEGIS logos on the twins. "I don't want to go with them." Preston twigs Cygnus as one of the Red Bastion escapees.
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		+	"When you realise this is a mistake, find us" says Jen. "We will find a way to help you." says Kara. Gareth and Cygnus drift off into the wind, disappearing like smoke.

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	Claymore, ignored the twins, charges through to try and protects Kara and Danny, shattering the door and the darkness granting them a brief respite. The room starts to freefall, but Regula jumps underneath it to grab it. While she's holding it up, her arms start to be drawn into the shadows holding the room together.		Claymore, ignored the twins, charges through to try and protects Kara and Danny, shattering the door and the darkness granting them a brief respite. The room starts to freefall, but Regula jumps underneath it to grab it. While she's holding it up, her arms start to be drawn into the shadows holding the room together.

−	We see the scene from Danny's vision. Gareth reaches out to Cygnus. "I can help you, come with me." Cygnus reaches out.	+	We see the scene from Danny's vision. Gareth reaches out to Cygnus. "I can help you, come with me." Cygnus reaches out. Danny charges her burn, and teleports in front of Gareth, interposing herself, and creates a solid brick wall moat around him. "Shut up!"

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 ===Danny's Sanctum===
+[[File:Shade.jpg|thumb|500px]]
 Danny invites everyone to her Sanctum.  Once they make their way into the old prop room the team catchup and start to fight about Red Bastion again.  She informs them about the vision.  Starting to investigate they reach out to [[Mr Mercury]] to contact [[Phillip Sebastian]], who was until recently resident in the [[New Day New Visions Academy]].  He mentions that he never met someone with that name, but they did talk about some of the early experiments.  Gareth and Danny were all to be among the saints [[The Saints]].  Cygnus was one of the earlier ones were to be the Seraphim of the church, the Angels.  Cygnus was a warning tale for the other residents.  They escaped, and had impressive powers.  Danny promises that Philip will be the last 'batch'.

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 Danny reaches out to Cygnus, and explains where she's from, and tells them that Gareth isn't good.  She offers to help fix their powers.  There's an illusory other Cygnus whispering in Danny's ear.  They call Danny and Gareth brother and sister.  "No peace, not anymore, nothing is safe anymore".  Illusory Cygnus puts a hand on Danny's shoulder.  Danny tries to comfort, it doesn't go well.  Their powers start to interact negatively, a feedback loop, the draining happens, absorbing a bit of the darkness, but it starts to reinforce and really starts to hurt Cygnus.
-Regula, Jen and Lloyd are freed from the shadows, and see them begin to recede in a direction towards the source.  They head towards it.  They near the room where they hear the screaming coming from Cygnus and Danny
+Regula, Jen and Lloyd are freed from the shadows, and see them begin to recede in a direction towards the source.  They head towards it.  They near the room where they hear the screaming coming from Cygnus and Danny.  Regula tries to blast through the shadow barrier protecting the room, but in it's concentrated form it's too strong - the room is now separated from the asylum as a whole in the blast.
-The [[Paragon Twins]] arrive with fanfare.  Pearl and Preston Paragon, both tall, blonde & athletic. Dressed in matching superhero costumes with the stlised Paragon logo, and an AEGIS shield on the shoulder.
+Kara reaches out to help the screaming Danny, trying to move her away from Cygnus, but gets pulled into the loop.  Danny starts to drain Kara.  It's a maelstrom of pain.
-Claymore charges through and protects Kara and Danny.
+With a flash of light, the [[Paragon Twins]] arrive with spectacular fanfare.  Pearl and Preston Paragon, both tall, blonde & athletic. Dressed in matching white bodysuit superhero costumes with the stylised P Paragon logo, and an AEGIS shield on the shoulder.  Preston smiles at Jen and offers to help.  Lloyd feels a strange connection with them.  Regula and Jen try to blag why they're here.  The twins explains that they're here to help.

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 The team arrive via spaceship at the Asylum, and see it's protected by some sort of shadowy energy field.  The team feel a chill as they pass through it, and Regula accidentally breaks the gate with a clang.  They see shadows moving behind the windows.  Jen tries to recon, but runs into a shadowy face that screams at her.  It dissolves when reflexively punched.  Danny takes the lead through the building, but she and Kara disappear around a corner, and when Regula, Jen and Lloyd go round it they don't see them anymore.
 The [[Paragon Twins]] arrive with fanfare.  Pearl and Preston Paragon, both tall, blonde athletic
 Claymore charges through and protects Kara and Danny.

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	===Mayhem Asylum===		===Mayhem Asylum===
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		+	[[File:asylum.jpg\|400px\|thumb\|left\|Mayhem Asylum]]

	The team arrive via spaceship at the Asylum, and see it's protected by some sort of shadowy energy field. The team feel a chill as they pass through it, and Regula accidentally breaks the gate with a clang. They see shadows moving behind the windows. Jen tries to recon, but runs into a shadowy face that screams at her. It dissolves when reflexively punched. Danny takes the lead through the building, but she and Kara disappear around a corner, and when Regula, Jen and Lloyd go round it they don't see them anymore.		The team arrive via spaceship at the Asylum, and see it's protected by some sort of shadowy energy field. The team feel a chill as they pass through it, and Regula accidentally breaks the gate with a clang. They see shadows moving behind the windows. Jen tries to recon, but runs into a shadowy face that screams at her. It dissolves when reflexively punched. Danny takes the lead through the building, but she and Kara disappear around a corner, and when Regula, Jen and Lloyd go round it they don't see them anymore.

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 The gang start to concoct a plan to figure out where this AEGIS location could be.  They contact [[Agent Nightingale]] via [[The Solution|Lloyd]], but she explains that they don't have any locations like that currently, with the changes at the Red Bastion.
-Before they can get too far. Shade appears in the sanctum, announcing himself with a cough.  "I need your help Danny".
+Before they can get too far. Shade appears in the sanctum, announcing himself with a cough.  "I need your help Danny".  He explains that he needs her help to save one of their 'siblings'.  He shows them a vision of Cygnus in the building, with smoke filling the room, and the unconscious form of Magda in the room.  Jen and Regula threaten Gareth, and he shows that he's only here in illusion form.  He explains people are after Cygnus at the Asylum, and Danny interrupts, they're on the way - "Ok let's go!".
 ===Mayhem Asylum===
 The [[Paragon Twins]] arrive with fanfare.  Pearl and Preston Paragon, both tall, blonde athletic
 Claymore charges through and protects Kara and Danny.